John Ramsbottom John Ramsbottom
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this imagery of water cleansing but also with the ebb and flow of tides that dumps things like drift wood on a beach(or us in life) or takes things away from us.(death)

John Ramsbottom John Ramsbottom
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The whole poem is magical. It also feels like song lyrics or may be one day

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I had this idea from a dream.

My feet walking in the sunset.
My head turned toward the sparkling waves.
I'm looking with a glint in my eye thinking of what I want to do
in my future.

My feet brushing the water, Lost in the sight, and my thoughts
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Light up my life, Light up my dreams.
Fill me up show me my life. Cause
I lay what my life was, is, and what
is to come.

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