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Slid down a flight of metaphors
but climbed back up using analogies.
It's like a summer time fling,
the way I manipulate these similes.
Try to be here, unconditionally
but unfortunately I'm never a member
of conversations. As they
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I'm trying to figure out a simple
way to keep this moment alive for eternity.


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