Samantha Wright Samantha Wright
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*beautiful, you left our the i.

David Anderson David Anderson
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Very well written. Loved it!

John Ramsbottom John Ramsbottom
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I love the idea of feeling a moment and not expressing this in words. How could you expand on this idea to say less in your verses and make us realise that you are feeling more?

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Kaitlyne Beaudin Kaitlyne Beaudin
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Silent words.

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