Dazzy Blue Dazzy Blue
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Moonlight making mysteries!!! Love this!!

Aaron Greene Aaron Greene
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i like that one too :)

Taylor Lanson Taylor Lanson
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Sirens are deadly Greene, don't you know that!

Aaron Greene Aaron Greene
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uh yeah, i know all to well, i used to be a Greek Pagan

Deborah Boydston Deborah Boydston
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Their moves, liquid. This line feels so graceful and enticing.

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I kind of pictured the oracle scene from the movie 300, the dancer/actress was filmed underwater for the shot

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We dance on the water. Another line that I love.

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Lady in the Water


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I came up with this the other night after listening to a song.  Here's the link:  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lEnnZwOJ90g


A peaceful midnight stroll
The air cooling the mind
Moonlight making mysteries around the shadows
A gentle melody attracts my curiosity 2 comments


The harmony gentle
Sweet
But alluring
Tempting 2 comments


I hurry my pace
In search of this dream
Louder it gets
Faster I tread


Luna’s light guides me
A clearing in the oaks
To a pristine lake
And an array of beauty


Their white gowns
Flowing as if underwater
Their feet barely grazing the surface
Their moves, liquid 2 comments


The song was beyond measure
I stand in awe
Enrapt in the spectacle
Greater than a dream


One of them breaks off
She floats my way
Her face serene
Her arms welcoming


I reach out
Her hands softer then silk
I accept her embrace
And flow with her


We dance on the water
Her eyes never leaving mine
Nor mine, hers
As she takes me home 2 comments


She kisses me
Her lips softer then her skin
And warm as the sun
Yet chilling, thrilling


As we descend
I care not
For I have her embrace
A memory of all memories


She lets me go
Drifts away and is gone
Leaving me at the bottom of the lake
Reaching for more


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