Harry Wells Harry Wells
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A good philosophy, Indira. Between full stops in this poem you don't need any of the commas. Especially the one between 'meet' and 'and' in the last but one line. A comma separates but 'and' is a conjunction (a part of speech meant to join) they don't go together.

Asma Ahsan Asma Ahsan
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yeah, I had trouble with the philosophy Harry. i have commented in the discussion section. Just shows how our views differ as individuals.

Indira Mukherjee Indira Mukherjee
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I have tried to correct it Harry. Thanks.

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Your beliefs are based on


what you have gone through your life.


My beliefs are based on


what I have gone through my life.


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your belief and my belief,


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COMPATIBILITY.


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