Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Gee Jan...You are so artistically poetic that I am slumped!

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Too much! The creativeness in your is sometimes very overpowering!

Summer Breeze Summer Breeze
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Thank you! What a compliment!

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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This is a great line...The sea of cars rush...

Summer Breeze Summer Breeze
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Thank you! wow, you are so generous, Lucy.

Davide Castel Davide Castel
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Gee Jan...You are so artistically poetic that I am slumped!

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This was an interesting thought process I just went with.


The gentle whir of fan blades
The clock tics on steadily while
A sea of blue carries me away
Dreaming is so rare in slumber
Seems waking ones come easier 2 comments


The harsh pump of air brakes
The bus roars on roughly while
A sea of faces blur and shift away
Laughter is so rare in morning
Seems weekend smiles come easier


The stifling heat of ovens
The clock tics on slowly while
A sea of customers take, then walk away
Manners are so rare in asking
Seems grumbling tones come easier 2 comments


The sweet scent of freedom
Tree boughs dance on joyfully while
A sea of blue reflects their play
Sunshine is so rare in evening
Seems darkened skies come easier


The soft glide of grasses
Feet step on lightly while
A sea of cars rush, mad to end the day
Peaceful is so rare in passing
Seems hurried thoughts come easier 2 comments


The warm glow of lamplight
Stones crunch on noisily while
A sea of black stretches forever and a day
Starshine is so rare in night’s cap
Seems emptiness comes easier


The gentle whir of fan blades
The clock tics on steadily while
A sea of blue carries me away
Dreaming is so rare in slumber
Seems waking ones come easier 2 comments


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