Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Upper case Title = Military Boots, as this is a title.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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First sentence is a little ambiguous - does the thunder relate to the tossing aside of hair, them clapping or them thudding against the Earth? It is always nice to structure such phrases so that the actions clearly relate to the subject. I know this sounds a bit petty bur it is always best to ensure that reader and writer are on the same page, so to speak.

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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...you know that you are "the" ant you know "best"?

Leslie Blackwell Leslie Blackwell
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Das Boot - The Boat. Classic 1980's movie!

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Imagine the thunder of your favorite aunt-or-uncle tossing aside their hair as thousands of them, clapping, thud against The Good Earth. Or... the earthquake of your lifetime. That is to say, as you realize that you are that ant you know. Or perhaps the next. Or perhaps the previous? The prior? It is a very long line and they were in fact falling or stepping gently, black rice grains, in a precise manner, all the way through the pheromone stream, cloud, and center to das boot. 3 comments



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