Daniel Bird Daniel Bird
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" - Theses flowers need a new start. Seasons have come gone and torn this garden apart. But for jus a while look at these stars. Its a universe secluded in bars. My eyes show my greatest scars. So I ask will you be the one to to rise? Will you plant flowers in our hearts and galaxies in our eyes? - " Brilliant! Awesome! There is an entire song here that sings of heartache and pain and the willingness to allow the light back in if only to fill those most deserving part of your soul - if only to allow new and positive petals to fall sweetly on your doorstep. ( :E

Shaunna Harper Shaunna Harper
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" We r" should be "we are," don't let sloppy spelling spoil a beautiful piece :)

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flowers in our hearts and galaxies in our eyes.


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And we will plant flowers in our hearts and galaxies in our eyes. I may be hurt and filled with lies. But my darling you are my demise. I build theses walls up so high. I swear they will touch the sky. And I know if they fell that I was never that sly. Whispers tell us to hope. You tell me to cope. But we r falling down this endless slope. One by one we all go mad. These lies of love are the best we have ever had. Oh I know these dreams are bad. But for a while please water my heart. Theses flowers need a new start. Seasons have come gone and torn this garden apart. But for jus a while look at these stars. Its a universe secluded in bars. My eyes show my greatest scars. So I ask will you be the one to to rise? Will you plant flowers in our hearts and galaxies in our eyes? 2 comments


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