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i think the sweetest sound i know is her breathing


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i see angels above me, i see demons below me, fighting over heaven.
i loved her more when i was sober.
i don't want a second chance.
love starts with that of a flickerin' cigarette
i swear i could feel your love before i knew your name.

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It's quite a shame that the day we met I barely remember / the details that would make a beautiful love tale did disappear / not your fault that I am more than certain is for sure my dear / back then life was to much for me to endure so i'd black out on the regular / drink until I can see the world turning and put so much poison in my body it's like I was a rock star / then you told me you loved me in a voice as delicate and soft as a warm whisper / with a kiss so gentle you reminded me of the things that make living tolerable / now when I touch you I shiver with ecstasy since I think I'm addicted to your face like a lovesick junkie /I will recall every moment that isn't a promise but a vow that to you I swear / like how when you are sleeping next to me you look so peaceful and calm like snow flakes melting in my hair


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